Like everyone else said, this game was cute and sweet, and I enjoyed the art and writing. I also happen to be from Rochester, NY, so it was a nice treat to see it show up in the wiki! But I liked the wiki in general, you did a great job with the tone and all that.

Ahhhh, this is really good! Sweet and hot 🍬🌶

Your art is great as always; Penny is really cute, and I like her outfit! I really liked how you used the pandemic setting to force Penny and the player to stay inside. Tiny apartment is very relatable.

Point & click element was interesting and I liked how some parts, such as when waiting for the Swiss roll to cool, leave it to the player to decide what to do next. That said, the controls were a bit awkward at times

The scene with the blanket is really good! The wiki was a cool surprise (Enhance Your Ectoplasm!), too, and the glitter on the blade edge was a nice touch!

Great job; I got the good ending and loved it <3

Cute and bite-sized, just in time for ghost season.  I wish it was longer, as it felt a little abbreviated towards the end, but you fit a lot into the jam period.

I liked the little bit of interactivity as it gave the experience a bit more bulk.  I particularly enjoyed browsing the ghost wiki.  This added a lot more interest than plain narration.

The art is cute and very clean, and the ghost being totally silent was a nice touch.  I did think it was a little odd that Penny Bun always seems to have the lights turned off, but it's spookier that way.

I got the bad ending first like an idiot 😭

I didn't know you could interact with the cardboard.

Other than that 10/10 short story

Ghost, sugar, spice, all things nice…

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This was quite enjoying and wholesome, and a little thirsty, haha, but i enjoyed reading through this, and i like the actual gameplay section despite it not being that much but still fun to explore, great job, keep up the good work

i also did a video on it

Very nice game !
I really like how the ghost was portrayed throughout the story, and the "Ghost Wiki" page on the computer, however i have some criticism to make (in good faith):

Problems:

• The lack of directions is a bit problematic, especially in the computer section, where no direction is given towards what should be clicked on or even searched, even if we can eventually find the page we need to find by clicking every link.
• I'm not aware of how Renpy works or if it is an engine limitation, but the movement could be improved if it was grid based instead of free movements that leads to guessing which pixel interacts with what.

The Good Stuff:

• Very gay and very wholesome, gay ghost is a big + from me
• Cute artstyle !
• Lesbian flag pattern on the walls :D
• Baking ! (i am biased, i love baking)
• Congratulations on making a game in such a short amount of time !
  

Suggestions:

• The font could be more stylized to fit the game more, you can find some on Google Fonts or Fontesk (free fonts !)
• More directions, as i previously said, it's a bit hard to understand what i'm supposed to do sometimes

I hope you continue on making such good games, and i wish you good luck !

This was a nice and well-written story. I liked the added ghostwiki section.

It's super cute so far, but for some reason I can't get past the part where she puts the roll in the fridge:( will update with how I managed to resolve it

Enjoyable story taking place during the year of loneliness. Very UwU.

that was enjoyable story, cute and well written. i like these characters, they gently treat each other despite the bullying thing. the jokes work well within the story without making it overly comedic and i like that consent thing really matters despite what title pic could possible suggest :)